Sunday, October 26, 2008

Six Traits - Voice


When you use voice in your writing, you leave your fingerprints on the page. This adds life to your piece. Sometimes it's easier to teach voice by letting our students pretend to be someone else, like a character in a photograph.

Look at the picture above; which character would write this?

  • Yes, I know that Ann Taylor is having a huge sale, but I'm going to have a memorable day with my family at the races. Kids grow up way too fast, and it's important to spend quality time together. Besides, once Jimmy Johnson takes the lead, I can nonchalantly surf Ann Taylor's site on my cell phone and purchase with my credit card. They'll be so engrossed in the race, they'll never know ... until my packages arrive. I'll have to explain THAT later, but that's DAYS away.

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